My teeth hurt. It’s because I’ve been gritting them, initially in that way you do when the awkwardness becomes unacceptably prolonged, when you’ve been making the point for so long it’s not reasonable that nobody seems to get it and you start to wonder if maybe it’s intentional, personal, but then the gritting took on a different quality altogether, beyond muscular, infiltrating the mind, finding focus. It became something else. It got real.
I’ve been reading Mazin Saleem’s The Prick, and it’s horrible. Horrible in the best possible way.
The tale begins with Will and Agatha on holiday – or travelling, as Will would have it. An unfortunate turn of events finds Will at the mercy of the sea but luckily Roland is there to save him. Unluckily, Roland turns out to be, well, you know…
With a title like The Prick you’re bound to be expecting at least one unlikeable character. For my money you get plenty more than one. I found myself wondering whether I would hang out with any of them, but then I’m not the most gregarious of Hectors. What you definitely don’t get is one dimension. The main characters may not be particularly likeable but neither are they so drenched in badness as to garner any cachet from the fact. They’re people, and just like people they’re apt to undo all the redeeming of a feature by behaving like a… you get the idea.
Regardless of whether you like them or not, for me there are two things that carry the story: the comedy and the tension. There’s something almost anecdotal about the writing style and it works well with the blend of comedy the writer presents, the laughs leaning towards the awkwardness of situations, the sense of in-jokes, and of the reader being on the inside rather than out. It’s in a knowing sort of style, though lightly done, and particularly evident in the chapter headings. They’re almost an aside that you read in a ‘what, seriously? still?’ kind of tone. And then there’s the delicious thread of tension Mazin Saleem maintains through the various phases of the story, a thread that gets stretched to breaking point in the final chapter! And that tension alone is enough to keep you turning the pages.
I love the cover too.
Mazin Saleem’s The Prick is a quick and witty read, a social comedy that’ll have you cringing as you laugh, and wondering just how far some people are prepared to go. But once you’re in you simply have to see it to the end.
The Prick was published by Open Pen on the 2nd May 2019, and you can buy it here.
My thanks to Sean at Open Pen for allowing me to review this book.Open Pen